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Hamleto Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
HELP: Can someone review my letter for Erasmus?Tanks!
Hi,
in january I hope to go in Finland for strudy in Helsinki University of Technology. I need some information from us so I decide to write an email, can someone review it for me?This is the letter:
Hello!
I'm Italian student from Politecnico di MIlano selected for project Erasmus in your university. This is my data:
Name: xxxx
Surname:xxxx
Department at HUT:xxxx
Studying period: xxxx
I already send you the documentation for my enrolment and I need to know when I'll be sure to study in your university because I'm in contact with a Finland factory and there's the possibility to do a stage period after my study in HUT.
I'll go in Helsinki on 20 November for visit this factory, so I think to come to your office to directly ask you some questions about my Erasmus period.
Tank you for your consideration,
Best Regards
xxxx
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is it good enough?
Many tanks at all,
Best regards
Gian
in january I hope to go in Finland for strudy in Helsinki University of Technology. I need some information from us so I decide to write an email, can someone review it for me?This is the letter:
Hello!
I'm Italian student from Politecnico di MIlano selected for project Erasmus in your university. This is my data:
Name: xxxx
Surname:xxxx
Department at HUT:xxxx
Studying period: xxxx
I already send you the documentation for my enrolment and I need to know when I'll be sure to study in your university because I'm in contact with a Finland factory and there's the possibility to do a stage period after my study in HUT.
I'll go in Helsinki on 20 November for visit this factory, so I think to come to your office to directly ask you some questions about my Erasmus period.
Tank you for your consideration,
Best Regards
xxxx
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is it good enough?
Many tanks at all,
Best regards
Gian
Top answer
Hello Gian, I corrected what you wrote a little bit, but mind: I'm Italian as well! Hamleto Hello! I am an Italian student of " Politecnico di M i lano "; I have been selected for the Erasmus project in your U niversity.
- Hello Gian, I corrected what you wrote a little bit, but mind: I'm Italian as well!
- Hamleto Hello!
- I am an Italian student of " Politecnico di M i lano "; I have been selected for the Erasmus project in your U niversity.
- This is my data: Name: xxxx Surname:xxxx Department at HUT:xxxx Studying period: xxxx I have already sen t you the documentation for my enrolment and I would need to know when I will start studying in your U niversity because I contact ed a Finnish factory for an apprenticeship after my study in HUT.
- I wi ll go to Helsinki on 20 th November in order to visit this factory, so I think I will come to your office and directly ask you some questions about my Erasmus period.
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Hello Gian, I corrected what you wrote a little bit, but mind: I'm Italian as well! 
HamletoHello!
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