Help!!! Can anyone proof read my letter of mot?? please!!!!

0 Hi, I'm a international student. English is my second launage if anyone can edit my letter of motivition that would be very helpful and I have major grammer problems!!! 02br
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00Dear Sir/Madam,02br
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00I am applying for a study opportunity in <school> and I am very enthusiastic about the Associate Degree in Hospitality Administration program and I have a strong interest in working the tourism and hospitality industry.02br
00Even though I have not yet completed the Business Diploma program at <school>, I believe my grades is above the average candidates and, I have taken many of the correspondence courses that the program is offering; therefore, I believe I would not have any academic problems for my school years in <school>. I recognize that knowledge is critical to be a successful hotel manager, nevertheless is the internship that <school>provides. 02br
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00I am presently assisting the manager at <work>. with sales and service. I assist with the advertising that is directed to tourists. I make recommendations to the manager on how to promote and provide service for our wine products to potencal clients. At presents, I do most of presentations of our products to tourists, so I have the excellent presentation and communication skills which these days are consider significant. 02br
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00I am an extremely hard working person, very honest and open minded. I am well organized and perform a leadership skill as a team, but I am very competitive. During my school years in 00, I took Marketing and Simulation courses; theses courses are highly competitive and required team work as-well management skills and I directed a superior quality level for the courses which need team work. 00 02br
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00Thank you very much for your time in considering me for the Associated Degree in Management. I feel that I would make great addition to your program as I have much experience in dealing with customers and knowledge in business. 02br
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00Sincerely yours,02br
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