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Grammar

HELP ASAP!! thanks!!

can someone tell me if i need a comma after which
and if the second sentence is not a fragment!
thanks

The sites were either rural, Indian Reservations or urban which in San Francisco turned out to be quite mulit-cultural! We would work at day camps or do a Kid's club.
  

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No fragments here, but your sentenses are unclear because of confusing commas and capitalizations. I assume you mean this: "The sites were either rural Indian reservations or urban, which in San Francisco turned out to be quite multicultural. " I've made several assumptions here.

  • No fragments here, but your sentenses are unclear because of confusing commas and capitalizations.
  • I assume you mean this: "The sites were either rural Indian reservations or urban, which in San Francisco turned out to be quite multicultural.
  • " I've made several assumptions here.
  • e.
  • a name rather than a discription).
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No fragments here, but your sentenses are unclear because of confusing commas and capitalizations. I assume you mean this: "The sites were either rural Indian reservations or urban, which in San Francisco turned out to be quite multicultural. We would work at day camps or do a Kid's Club." I've made several assumptions here. One is that there were two kinds of sites not three (rural, urban,

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