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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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0 Hello. I hope someone will help me and find (and correct) mistakes in this short text. I will be very grateful. 02br
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00Mr. Daniel Rozberg is typical example of exemplary citizen of Magowo city. As a representative of Magowo authorities – vicemayor - I have been in contact with local teenagers and with Mr. Daniel, who proved to be a responsible person. He has been securing local events, parties and sports competitions – as a lifeguard. As physiotherapy student he proved to be professional and patient towards his patients during 01u01span01a01span00v02span02a02span02u01span01a01span00oluntary services02span02a02span01span00 00in civic 00hospital. 02br
00He can easily eastablish human relations and he is disciplary and creative person.02br
00As a Vicemayor of Magowo city I fully recommend Mr. Daniel as a trustworthy person, who will surely cope with all required tasks and will be able to met expectations of most demanding employer.02br
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01span00I have met Mr. Daniel during ceremonies organized at school in which he have been learning. As a member of school self-governemt he had frequent contact with city authorities. During my visitations at school I had an opportunity and pleasure to 02span01span01a01span00to enter into communication02span02a02span01span00 00with Mr. Daniel and carry out several conversations. I have no stipulations to this person. 02br
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01blockquote 01cite 10Anonymous12cite 10Mr. Daniel Rozberg is 11b 11u 10an 12u 12b 10exemplary citizen of Magowo city. As a representative of Magowo authorities – vicemayor - I have been in contact with local teenagers and with Mr.

  • 01blockquote 01cite 10Anonymous12cite 10Mr.
  • Daniel Rozberg is 11b 11u 10an 12u 12b 10exemplary citizen of Magowo city.
  • As a representative of Magowo authorities – vicemayor - I have been in contact with local teenagers and with Mr.
  • Daniel, who proved to be a responsible person.
  • He has been 11b 10securing12b 10 local events, parties and sports competitions – as a lifeguard.
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0Bolded the glaring errors for you.01blockquote
01cite10Anonymous12cite10Mr. Daniel Rozberg is 11b11u10an 12u12b10exemplary citizen of Magowo city. As a representative of Magowo authorities – vicemayor - I have been in contact with local teenagers and with Mr. Daniel, who proved to be a responsible person. He has b

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