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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Help a setenece please




Noted the vessel has been arrived the USA today at 7:30. Could you please assist with close follow-up its status and release goods to the consignee after customs clearance. Kindly keep us informed.
  

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Hi, I have underlined some parts that need work. Noted the vessel has been arrived the USA today at 7:30. Could you please assist with close follow-up its status and release goods to the consignee after customs clearance.

— Clive

  • Hi, I have underlined some parts that need work.
  • Noted the vessel has been arrived the USA today at 7:30.
  • Could you please assist with close follow-up its status and release goods to the consignee after customs clearance.
  • Kindly keep us informed.
  • Clive
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Hi,

I have underlined some parts that need work.

Noted the vessel has been arrived the USA today at 7:30. Could you please assist with close follow-up its status and release goods to the consignee after customs clearance. Kindly keep us informed.

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Hi teacher,




Please review the revision, thanks




We noticed the vessel was arrived the USA today at 7:30. Could you please assist to follow-up closely its status and release goods to the consignee after customs clearance. Kindly keep us informed
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Hi,

We noticed the vessel was arrived the USA today at 7:30. Could you please assist to follow-up closely its status and release goods to the consignee after customs clearance. Kindly keep us informed

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