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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

HELP

I made a quote & not sure if the grammar is correct.

"I may not be hearing your thoughts. But I can feel your attitude."

Please help.

  

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It is not a quote until somebody quotes it. Right now, it is just a comment. It is possible to split that into two sentences the way you have done, but there seems to be no good reason for it, and it damages the meaning.

  • It is not a quote until somebody quotes it.
  • Right now, it is just a comment.
  • It is possible to split that into two sentences the way you have done, but there seems to be no good reason for it, and it damages the meaning.
  • The advice you hear against starting a sentence with a conjunction is meant to help you prevent exactly this.
  • Other than that, it is fine.
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It is not a quote until somebody quotes it. Right now, it is just a comment.

It is possible to split that into two sentences the way you have done, but there seems to be no good reason for it, and it damages the meaning. The advice you hear against starting a sentence with a conjunction is meant to help you prevent exactly this. Other than that, it is fine. Make it "I may not be hearing

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