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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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could you please correct this?:

Please find attached the list of the companies.
In the first send them your company profile just to inform them we are here!! then you can arrange a meeting to explain them who are you, why you are better than the others companies your security ways and policy.then for sure the business will come
  

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Please find attached the list of the companies. In the first letter, send them your company profile just to inform them you are here! Then you can arrange a meeting to explain to them who you are, why you are better than the other companies, your security systems and policy.

  • Please find attached the list of the companies.
  • In the first letter, send them your company profile just to inform them you are here!
  • Then you can arrange a meeting to explain to them who you are, why you are better than the other companies, your security systems and policy.
  • Then business will come your way for sure.
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Please find attached the list of the companies.

In the first letter, send them your company profile just to inform them you are here! Then you can arrange a meeting to explain to them who you are, why you are better than the other companies, your security systems and policy. Then business will come your way for sure.

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