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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Hi i'd studied economics and i want to apply for health economic and management master,
so can you help me to modified the second sentence, because i am not sure that is correct "One of my favorite subjects as a child was Biology. In addition, working in the field of Economy and implying that knowledge in the area of Pharmaceutical or Health care industry it will fulfil my expectations."
so can you help me to modified the second sentence, because i am not sure that is correct "One of my favorite subjects as a child was Biology. In addition, working in the field of Economy and implying that knowledge in the area of Pharmaceutical or Health care industry it will fulfil my expectations."
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Hi I've studied economics and I want to apply for a health economic and management masters degree.
So can you please help me to modify the second sentence, because I am not sure that is correct.
In addition, working in the field of Economy (Economy is not a field of study. It is
So can you please help me to modify the second sentence, because I am not sure that is correct.
In addition, working in the field of Economy (Economy is not a field of study. It is
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Thanks a lot for the replay.
So, can i say something like this In addition, working in the field of finance/management and using that knowledge in/within the area of the Pharmaceutical or Health care industry, it will satisfy/fulfill my expectations.
Or this sentence doesn't make sense?
Thanks again.
So, can i say something like this In addition, working in the field of finance/management and using that knowledge in/within the area of the Pharmaceutical or Health care industry, it will satisfy/fulfill my expectations.
Or this sentence doesn't make sense?
Thanks again.
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Please post in your best English. It is good practice.
Thanks a lot for the replay.
So, can i say something like this?
In addition, working in the field of finance/management and using that knowledge in/within the area of the Pharmaceutical or Health care industry,
Thanks a lot for the replay.
So, can i say something like this?
In addition, working in the field of finance/management and using that knowledge in/within the area of the Pharmaceutical or Health care industry,
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Thanks man.
Well my expectations from the future. So, instead of it can i leave just will?
And to sound something like ''In addition, working in the field of finance or management and using that knowledge within the area of the Pharmaceutical or Health care industry, will satisfy/fulfill my expectations/aspirations/goals.''
Well my expectations from the future. So, instead of it can i leave just will?
And to sound something like ''In addition, working in the field of finance or management and using that knowledge within the area of the Pharmaceutical or Health care industry, will satisfy/fulfill my expectations/aspirations/goals.''
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AnonymousSo, instead of it can i leave just will?That will make the sentence grammatically sound.
You don't need "the area of the..". That is excessively wordy. "within the heath care industry" is much better. Note that pharmaceuticals are in the category of "health care", so the "or" conjunction is not sen
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