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Asia1234 Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
help !!!!!!
How would i describe the hospital in this sentence below ?
She picked me up and we went straight to the hospital and there they rushed me to labor and delivery because I was experiencing pre-term labor, which they had to stop because I was not yet 32 weeks to give birth to a healthy baby. My baby would have been rushed to a different hospital because I would have been premature. So they gave me medicine to stop the labor process. They made me stay overnight in the hospital so they can watch over me
She picked me up and we went straight to the hospital and there they rushed me to labor and delivery because I was experiencing pre-term labor, which they had to stop because I was not yet 32 weeks to give birth to a healthy baby. My baby would have been rushed to a different hospital because I would have been premature. So they gave me medicine to stop the labor process. They made me stay overnight in the hospital so they can watch over me
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If you want me to untangle your sentences, here is my suggested wording. By the way, you should break up the long opening sentence to make it clearer. She picked me up and we went straight to the hospital.
- If you want me to untangle your sentences, here is my suggested wording.
- By the way, you should break up the long opening sentence to make it clearer.
- She picked me up and we went straight to the hospital.
- Once there, they rushed me to the labor and delivery room because I was experiencing pre-term labor, which they had to stop because I was not yet 32 weeks pregnant and an early delivery would endanger the baby.
- They gave me medicine to stop the labor process.
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If you want me to untangle your sentences, here is my suggested wording. By the way, you should break up the long opening sentence to make it clearer.
She picked me up and we went straight to the hospital. Once there, they rushed me to the labor and delivery room because I was experiencing pre-term labor, which they had to stop because I was not yet 32 weeks pregnant
She picked me up and we went straight to the hospital. Once there, they rushed me to the labor and delivery room because I was experiencing pre-term labor, which they had to stop because I was not yet 32 weeks pregnant
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The only information we have about the hospital is that they are not equipped to deal with premature deliveries. You could say that.
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okay. Thanks!
I also had another question. Im not really good with punctuation, could you help me ?
I also had another question. Im not really good with punctuation, could you help me ?
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