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Sick Of english Posted 15 years ago
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Is the following sentence grammaticaly correct or could it be replaced with something better:

-I had been waiting for a good event to happen until (the moment when) I saw her entering the room.
  

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Sick Of english Is the following sentence grammaticaly correct or could it be replaced with something better: -I had been waiting for a good event to happen until (the moment when) I saw her entering the room. I had been waiting for something good to happen when I saw her enter the room. (You can look up the lyrics to "Tonight" from "West Side Story" to have it in a more poetic form: Today, all day I had a feeling, a mircale would happen, I know now I was right.

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  • Sick Of english Is the following sentence grammaticaly correct or could it be replaced with something better: -I had been waiting for a good event to happen until (the moment when) I saw her entering the room.
  • I had been waiting for something good to happen when I saw her enter the room.
  • (You can look up the lyrics to "Tonight" from "West Side Story" to have it in a more poetic form: Today, all day I had a feeling, a mircale would happen, I know now I was right.
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Sick Of englishIs the following sentence grammaticaly correct or could it be replaced with something better: -I had been waiting for a good event to happen until (the moment when) I saw her entering the room.

I had been waiting for something good to happen when I saw her enter the room.

(You can look up the lyrics to "Tonight" fro
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