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Kitten67 Posted 17 years ago
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what is wrong wit this sentence?

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Hi, kitten, Thanks for joining us. Welcome to English Forums. I can see nothing wrong with your sentence, except that you did what I just did.

  • Hi, kitten, Thanks for joining us.
  • Welcome to English Forums.
  • I can see nothing wrong with your sentence, except that you did what I just did.
  • You followed a comma with a capital letter.
  • You should use a small "s" on "such," since it doesn't begin a new sentence.
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Hi, kitten, Thanks for joining us. Welcome to English Forums.

I can see nothing wrong with your sentence, except that you did what I just did. You followed a comma with a capital letter. You should use a small "s" on "such," since it doesn't begin a new sentence.

Some people might prefer "including" to "such," but I don't think "such" is incorrect. I personally would use "inc

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