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Is this a strong reason to request my boss transfer us report to him? Pls. comment and help to correct my sentence in more polite. Thank you so much.
Do you think our team should report to you directly instead of Marketing Dept? We have some conflict on the same working flow with marketing but different points of view which cannot be agreed. I would like discuss with you at your free time. Please advise.
Do you think our team should report to you directly instead of Marketing Dept? We have some conflict on the same working flow with marketing but different points of view which cannot be agreed. I would like discuss with you at your free time. Please advise.
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Try: Our team is unsure whether we should report directly to you or to the Marketing Dept. We have also some disagreements with the Marketing Dept. on the working flow, but this matter cannot still be resolved.
- Try: Our team is unsure whether we should report directly to you or to the Marketing Dept.
- We have also some disagreements with the Marketing Dept.
- on the working flow, but this matter cannot still be resolved.
- Consequently, I like to discuss with you about these problems when you are available.
- Thank you.
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Try:
Our team is unsure whether we should report directly to you or to the Marketing Dept. We have also some disagreements with the Marketing Dept. on the working flow, but this matter cannot still be resolved. Consequently, I like to discuss with you about these problems when you are available. Thank you.
Chris
Our team is unsure whether we should report directly to you or to the Marketing Dept. We have also some disagreements with the Marketing Dept. on the working flow, but this matter cannot still be resolved. Consequently, I like to discuss with you about these problems when you are available. Thank you.
Chris
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