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Volcano1985 Posted 17 years ago
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I will blow up the darkness inside me and a brand new human being and a gleaming body will cryingly take form on the soil with the fatal tears of my brain.

Is it correct for grammar ?
  

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Volcano1985 I will blow up the darkness inside me , and a brand new human being and a gleaming body will cryingly take form on the soil with the fatal tears of my brain. Is it correct for grammar ? k.

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  • Volcano1985 I will blow up the darkness inside me , and a brand new human being and a gleaming body will cryingly take form on the soil with the fatal tears of my brain.
  • Is it correct for grammar ?
  • k.
  • Punctuation, as noted with a comma.
  • ] It's rather wordy - and a bit awkward to read.
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Volcano1985I will blow up the darkness inside me , and a brand new human being and a gleaming body will cryingly take form on the soil with the fatal tears of my brain.

Is it correct for grammar ?


Grammar o.k. Punctuation, as noted with a comma. [Is 'cryingly' a word, or are you taking special liberties here?]
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cryingly, i wanted to use it as adverb, how to take form on..

Its from Can Yücel
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