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0 My colleague was sent an email to the customer, however, the text is not very clear and I would like to add some message on top of her message, but I'm worry she will unhappy. Could you help me to make this sentence be more polite and no hard feeling with her? Below two sentence, which will be better ? Or any sugguest for me ? Thank you 02 br
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00 I would like to describe some more procedure; on top of Susan's message .......... 02 br
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00 Susan has been sent you the new procedure yesterday, but I would like to add some additional information to you ............... 0-
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00 I would like to describe some more procedure; on top of Susan's message .......... 02 br
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00 Susan has been sent you the new procedure yesterday, but I would like to add some additional information to you ............... 0-
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02 br 02 br 00 Your second version is better, but what do you think of this? Leave Susan out of it. 0-
- 02 br 02 br 00 Your second version is better, but what do you think of this?
- Leave Susan out of it.
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0 Hi Anon, 02 br
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00 You need a little more help with your tenses before you do anything else. 02 br
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00 Your second version is better, but what do you think of this? Leave Susan out of it. You are supplementing, not coming "on top of it." 02 br
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00 I would like to provide some additional points to supplement the information you recei
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00 You need a little more help with your tenses before you do anything else. 02 br
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00 Your second version is better, but what do you think of this? Leave Susan out of it. You are supplementing, not coming "on top of it." 02 br
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00 I would like to provide some additional points to supplement the information you recei
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