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Elena Petuhova Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Hello to everybody! Could you please have a look at my letter to University asking for information? I would really appreciate any advice/corrections

Hello everybody! I am writing a letter to University asking for information about my IELTS certificate. Could you please correct it? I would really appreciate that!

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would be kindly obliged if you pay a little attention toward my letter. I am writing to request some information about applying for your “Computer Science” Master’s program. Could you please indicate if my IELTS certificate (it has 6.5 overall) which is dated by 13.12.2014 will be suitable for applying for summer term of 2017 which starts in April? Deadline for applications for that program is in autumn of 2016.
I obtained Bachelor’s degree with honors at Baltic State Technical University VOENMEKH n.a. D.F. Ustinova (Saint-Petersburg, Russia) in “Computer Science and computer engineering” and Master’s degree with honors at the same university in “Automation and control”. I have got working experience as a software developer and engineer.
This program is a great opportunity for me to get European degree of high quality and achieve my career goal which is getting a position in International company.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully,

Elena P.
  

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Hello, Elena—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member. Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request information about applying for your Computer Science Master’s program.

  • Hello, Elena—and welcome to English Forums.
  • Thank you for registering as a member.
  • Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request information about applying for your Computer Science Master’s program.
  • 5 overall) dated 13 December 2014 is suitable in applying for your 2017 summer term, which starts in April?
  • The deadline for applications for that program is autumn 2016.
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Hello, Elena—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request information about applying for your Computer Science Master’s program.

Could you please tell me if my IELTS certificate (6.5 overall) dated 13 December 2014 is suitable in applying for your 2017 summer term, which starts in

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