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The charts below illustrate the changes of the amount of money spent by government on each university student as well as the number of students enrolling in UK universities.

Overall, while the number of UK university students increased between 1997 and 2001 before dipping slightly in 2001, there was a downward trend in the government spending in the period of 5 years. However, students being in high-income families held the largest share of ....... (can you help me to write the rest)

As we can see from the first diagram, the number of UK university students rose steadily from about 1.2 million to just under 2.0 million over 4 years. However, this figure declined minimally to roughly 1.7 million in 2001. By contrast, the amount of money spent by government on each university student decreased considerably from UM600 to approximately UM150 in the period of 5 years. The proportion of students living in high-income families soaked up the pie chart with the rate of 60%, while that of students coming from low-income families was the lowest at 8%.