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Pupil Posted 10 years ago
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could somebody check the text below? "The ship got into the storm on Sunday night. After the ship had drowned, the sailors swam three kilometres to find earth. As a result, they found themselves on the desert island. The sailors made word "help" from branches to be sighted from the rescue airplains. They were found in the morning of Thursday by US NAVY. "
  

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The ship sailed into a storm on Sunday night. After the ship had sunk , the sailors swam three kilometres to find land . As a result, they found themselves on a desert island.

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  • The ship sailed into a storm on Sunday night.
  • After the ship had sunk , the sailors swam three kilometres to find land .
  • As a result, they found themselves on a desert island.
  • The sailors made the word "help" from branches (If it was a desert, where did they find branches?
  • ) so they could be sighted from the rescue airplanes .
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The ship sailed into a storm on Sunday night. After the ship had sunk, the sailors swam three kilometres to find land. As a result, they found themselves on a desert island. The sailors made the word "help" from branches (If it was a desert, where did they find branches? Trees and bushes don't grow in deserts.) so they could be sighted from
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I meant an island where there were no people, but I could not find the suitable word. So I translated the word using Google translator. sorry for my English)
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Deserted might be the word you need.
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