Hello teachers, this is an ielts writing task 1. Thanks for checking my mistakes and giving me advices ;)

Topic: The diagram shows the plan for rebuilding shopping centre in central town. (The maps below show the layout of a shopping mall before and after the construction.)

The diagram illustrates the changes in shopping center in the future. (The maps show how the shopping mall will change after the transformation.)

Overall, the shopping mall will be filled with wide range of shops and entertaining services in the future. There will also be the modern technology in the layout of the shopping mall's changes.

The fastfood restaurant will be replaced by a souvenir shop while a cafeteria will be constructed next to a new lift and escalator in level 1. However, the shops will be expanded in a line and demolished partly for an escalator. At the same time in level 2, the escalator will be improved will a new lift built next to it. A cinema will be spranged up in front of shops which will be replaced the old shops horizontally (i don't know how to describe the shops here). A cash machine, nevertheless, will be put up next to a space in level 2.