Hello! please revise my letter. Thank you
Dear Madam,
As per your previous instruction to monitor the DR in the Head Office, details are listed below for your reference.
I would like to seek your kind attention regarding the pending Daily Report that we haven’t received it yet. Daily Report No. 106 dated 13 November 2018, only 1 major issue (bus driver found a child sleeping).
PRO sent the DR in the Head Office last 15 November 2018, As of today’s date total number of days in the head office is 1 week & 3 days to be exact.
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Your text is unclear. You use acronyms that I do not understand: DR, PRO. I am guessing what you want to say.
- Your text is unclear.
- You use acronyms that I do not understand: DR, PRO.
- I am guessing what you want to say.
- You need to think about your text and be very precise and logical.
- You asked me to review the Daily Reports (DR) sent to the Head Office.
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Your text is unclear. You use acronyms that I do not understand: DR, PRO. I am guessing what you want to say. You need to think about your text and be very precise and logical.
You asked me to review the Daily Reports (DR) sent to the Head Office. The details of my review follow below.
1. We have not received the current DR.
2. The DR of 13 November had one major issue. A
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