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Topics: Why students get rid of university

There are several reasons why students get rid of university. the first reason is that they can't affort the fee at university. Nowadays, may universities have a high tuition so students must face-up with the financial problem. Much as college students have to pay a lot of money for the living conditions. For instance, each month they have spend money on renting house, eating, shopping. Thus, students tend to not keep studying university, they focus on looking for a job or setting up their career. The second reason is that they have trouble with personal problem. Their parents don't care about them, they lack advises, suggestion from their relationships. They have to get married because they get pregnant. Maybe, the curriculumat college is too boring to catch their attention. Also, most students follow their passion and they learn fron the life, the experiences they had. Finally, students concentrate on much part time jobs instead of studying at school. They pay a lot of affort to entrance the university but the couldn't accomplish the courses and fail the exam. That will make them frustrate and then they drop out school. In short, ( I don't know how to write the conclusion for this topic):(

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