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Motivation Letter
Muhammad Mohsin
Country Name
Cell Phone: [ ]
Email:
Nov 2016
Admission office Uni name
Dear Sir, Madam
I am interested to apply for a Master of Engineering in Automation and Control starting in 2017. I graduated in 2014, from Federal Urdu University Arts Science and Technology Islamabad Pakistan and hold a Bachelor degree in Electrical (Electronic) Engineering.
In this previous education, I learned about the Bachelor level engineering principles that are used in now a day’s technology. After this I have some experience in Electrical& Instrumentation.During experience I found alot of instruments their control it was so pretty.
My latest working as Internee Engineer in Fertilizer Industry was so typical. I have learnt as much as possible during my internship.I do some experience just to check out level of study with practically working and clear about for further specilization in which field.
One day when I questioned to my boss?
We are working here in fully assembled designed fixed parameters of plant and feeling champions. But I said those who designed it are real champions. The answer was Italian are those one who designed it.
From that day I realize about those who designed it in past era clearly beyond of this limit.
It was enough for my inspiration& motivation that I should go for higher studies. I talk to my father& brother for financial support they allowed me.I feel fine and say thanks to my father& brother.
Later I search about Italy Engineering Universities and found that Politecnico di Milano is best one for Automation and Control Engineering.After getting broad exposure about Industrial automation along with general overview. I decide to become familiar with innovative technologies by doing a degree in this field.
So now I intend to pursue my higher study in renowned Institute abroad Politecnico di Milano one of the best university in Italy also competing with world universities that ensures the high standard of education.
The advance study In Automation and Control Engineering with emphasis on innovative technology focusing on research, design and implementation. Politecnico di Milano university best suits me because it offers many courses that are specifically related to areas of my interest. Also instructions of lecture’s in English language.
It will be helpful for me to develop post-graduation work and learn from professors with grate experience in theory and practice.
The achieved study patterns and methods provided by Politecnico di Milano the undoubtedly knowledgeable which will help me to develop my previous academic standards of engineering degree.
I hope this department is a useful addition to my current education that I can use for my later professional career. This department will definitely increase my opportunities to get a good job after completion of my study where ever got chance.
I have interest in automation control systems because its time need.
Today industry control entirely open, close loop feedback and PID control systems for operating equipment such as machinery, processes in factories, boilers and heat treating ovens, switching on telephone networks, steering and stabilization of ships, aircraft and other applications with minimal or reduced human intervention.
I believe obtaining a Master's Degree will provide the necessary background for me to be to anticipate and react to ever-changing environments in technology era.
It’s my pleasure if I can engage myself and ability to achieve knowledge from Italian University.I am confident enough that I could be able to accomplish higher study in the proposed field that will contributes to my future professional interest as well as to the society as a whole. I firmly believe that if I could get a chance to cultivate my potentiality in Politecnico di Milano that will definitely satisfy my thirst for higher study and it’s a unique opportunity for me to get such kind of offer from modern country like Italy.
I believe that as a holder of Bachelor Degree in Electrical (Electronics) Engineering course description being very close major to Automation Engineering with a little experience in Pakistan.I have the capability and potential to fulfill this Master degree program and am confident that I could be an active, open-minded and useful student in this program.
Thank you for reviewing my application, and I look forward to your acceptance.
Yours truly,
Muhammad Mohsin
Muhammad Mohsin
Country Name
Cell Phone: [ ]
Email:
Nov 2016
Admission office Uni name
Dear Sir, Madam
I am interested to apply for a Master of Engineering in Automation and Control starting in 2017. I graduated in 2014, from Federal Urdu University Arts Science and Technology Islamabad Pakistan and hold a Bachelor degree in Electrical (Electronic) Engineering.
In this previous education, I learned about the Bachelor level engineering principles that are used in now a day’s technology. After this I have some experience in Electrical& Instrumentation.During experience I found alot of instruments their control it was so pretty.
My latest working as Internee Engineer in Fertilizer Industry was so typical. I have learnt as much as possible during my internship.I do some experience just to check out level of study with practically working and clear about for further specilization in which field.
One day when I questioned to my boss?
We are working here in fully assembled designed fixed parameters of plant and feeling champions. But I said those who designed it are real champions. The answer was Italian are those one who designed it.
From that day I realize about those who designed it in past era clearly beyond of this limit.
It was enough for my inspiration& motivation that I should go for higher studies. I talk to my father& brother for financial support they allowed me.I feel fine and say thanks to my father& brother.
Later I search about Italy Engineering Universities and found that Politecnico di Milano is best one for Automation and Control Engineering.After getting broad exposure about Industrial automation along with general overview. I decide to become familiar with innovative technologies by doing a degree in this field.
So now I intend to pursue my higher study in renowned Institute abroad Politecnico di Milano one of the best university in Italy also competing with world universities that ensures the high standard of education.
The advance study In Automation and Control Engineering with emphasis on innovative technology focusing on research, design and implementation. Politecnico di Milano university best suits me because it offers many courses that are specifically related to areas of my interest. Also instructions of lecture’s in English language.
It will be helpful for me to develop post-graduation work and learn from professors with grate experience in theory and practice.
The achieved study patterns and methods provided by Politecnico di Milano the undoubtedly knowledgeable which will help me to develop my previous academic standards of engineering degree.
I hope this department is a useful addition to my current education that I can use for my later professional career. This department will definitely increase my opportunities to get a good job after completion of my study where ever got chance.
I have interest in automation control systems because its time need.
Today industry control entirely open, close loop feedback and PID control systems for operating equipment such as machinery, processes in factories, boilers and heat treating ovens, switching on telephone networks, steering and stabilization of ships, aircraft and other applications with minimal or reduced human intervention.
I believe obtaining a Master's Degree will provide the necessary background for me to be to anticipate and react to ever-changing environments in technology era.
It’s my pleasure if I can engage myself and ability to achieve knowledge from Italian University.I am confident enough that I could be able to accomplish higher study in the proposed field that will contributes to my future professional interest as well as to the society as a whole. I firmly believe that if I could get a chance to cultivate my potentiality in Politecnico di Milano that will definitely satisfy my thirst for higher study and it’s a unique opportunity for me to get such kind of offer from modern country like Italy.
I believe that as a holder of Bachelor Degree in Electrical (Electronics) Engineering course description being very close major to Automation Engineering with a little experience in Pakistan.I have the capability and potential to fulfill this Master degree program and am confident that I could be an active, open-minded and useful student in this program.
Thank you for reviewing my application, and I look forward to your acceptance.
Yours truly,
Muhammad Mohsin
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You posted this at least three times to the forum. Please don't do that in future. Post your question once and wait for a response.
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- Please don't do that in future.
- Post your question once and wait for a response.
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You posted this at least three times to the forum. Please don't do that in future. Post your question once and wait for a response.
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You posted this four times (maybe more). Please post only once. I have highlighted some mistakes below.
Also, you need to think about making your arguments stronger.
Muhammad Mohsin
Country Name
Cell Phone: +923331931967
Email:
Nov 2016
Admission office Uni name
Dear Sir, Madam
I am interested to ap
Also, you need to think about making your arguments stronger.
Muhammad Mohsin
Country Name
Cell Phone: +923331931967
Email:
Nov 2016
Admission office Uni name
Dear Sir, Madam
I am interested to ap
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