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Jenn123 Posted 11 years ago
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Hello! Is the sentence well structured?
Hello! Is the sentence well structured? Let me know if there're any grammatical mistakes. Thank you.
1. Nini and Haikal on an adventure trip to Gold Coast, Australia. Everything that Nini and Haikal plan do not go accordingly, but somehow it turns out to be such an awesome getaway.
2. When Nini and Haikal embarks on a journey to the Gold Coast, Australia that turns into an adventure more than anything they could have ever imagined.
3. A combination of Haikal, Nini and Zizan has made the trip to Gold Coast, Australia a worthwhile journey for Aunty Lisa and Pak Su. Although, it doesn’t goes as planned, they really enjoyed the trip.
1. Nini and Haikal on an adventure trip to Gold Coast, Australia. Everything that Nini and Haikal plan do not go accordingly, but somehow it turns out to be such an awesome getaway.
2. When Nini and Haikal embarks on a journey to the Gold Coast, Australia that turns into an adventure more than anything they could have ever imagined.
3. A combination of Haikal, Nini and Zizan has made the trip to Gold Coast, Australia a worthwhile journey for Aunty Lisa and Pak Su. Although, it doesn’t goes as planned, they really enjoyed the trip.
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There are errors in the original sentences. The following is a revision in accordance with US usage.
1. Nini and Haikai go on a vacation to Australia's Gold Coast. Their trip does not go as planned, but nevertheless it turns out to be an awesome adventure.
2. Nini and Haikai's trip to the Australia's Gold Coast turns out to be an adventure they could never have imagined.
1. Nini and Haikai go on a vacation to Australia's Gold Coast. Their trip does not go as planned, but nevertheless it turns out to be an awesome adventure.
2. Nini and Haikai's trip to the Australia's Gold Coast turns out to be an adventure they could never have imagined.
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Thank you for your feedback and also could you please check the following sentence as well.
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Nini and Haikal plan for Aunty Lisa and Pak Su Hairi a trip to Gold Coast, Australia. They hire Zizan as their tour guide in Gold Coast. Zizan has never been to Gold Coast in his life. Everything that Nini and Haikal plan does not go accordingly but somehow it turns out
Long description
Nini and Haikal plan for Aunty Lisa and Pak Su Hairi a trip to Gold Coast, Australia. They hire Zizan as their tour guide in Gold Coast. Zizan has never been to Gold Coast in his life. Everything that Nini and Haikal plan does not go accordingly but somehow it turns out
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