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The world is developing and non-stop innovation. From Finance and Economics, to Societal and prospective modernization. Unfortunately, two Chinese people who visited Viet Nam get into had flu-like symtoms. They had the cold, fever and cough. Everything was terrifying until now. Due to ignorance and lack of knowledge about the pandemic – Covid 19, both Vietnamese and Chinese caused widespread inflection to other countries. As consequence, the sudden spread of Coronavirus went out of control for a long time. I feel so scared thinking about it. However, I think that there are both positive and negative outcomes of being in quarantine at home.

When being received the news of Covid – 19 exploded in Vietnam, I feel tedious a lot and cannot go out of home or walking to school. Honestly, my mind is nearly unable to study, go on doing sport or just chill out at a coffee shop with my besties, and my family, too. Besides, I knew that the spirit of citizens would fall down seriously when this pandemic attacked. That is not the end, the carelessness of some people about protecting Coronavirus during the Tet Holiday in 2020 is unpredictable, it is led to the handful of epidemic victims dramatically plunged, all of the shop, supermarket, school, Office, Meeting, Restaurant, Entertainment,...had been inactivated. Furthermore, the government bans a strict law that one of us must stay at quarantines and should not come out in case of unnecessary. What gloomy days!

I realize that the effect of Coronavirus not only Viet Nam but the world is also as the punishment of God, but it is not mean that it was sacked down completely. During the Coronavirus day off, I spend time to let off some steam likes: Cooking, Doing exercises, treadmill, hit the gym, and self - entertained, that is the moments I can unwind because of hectic schedules or sticking to crazy deadlines. Also, I gradually dip into Broadcast as well as information about Covid – 19 to fight against it. My bustling daily life was delayed for a short time to recover from this serious illness. On the other hand, I suppose that the global invasion of Coronavirus was played a sustainable role to ease criminals of humans and resetting the discipline of each nation. Thanks to the pandemic, I could enjoy a fast– pace life.

To recapitulate, the Coronavirus still was occurring day by day, mostly in Europe and Asia. Currently, the research on vaccination is invaluable for anyone who is contaminated by this pandemic. Hence, the keeping distance between each individual must be tightened until Corona ended