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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Hello, I need to be sure that I wrote this sentences correct.
It is a part of my Motivation letter, would you please correct it for me.
I am very interested in Marine Biology, and I believe my background will qualify me for such a Master’s program. Being admitted to such an elite University in terms of Marine Biology is not only a great honor but also a wonderful opportunity for students like me who are extremely interested in research but do not have many professional research foundation in their own country. I would like to continue my higher education and pursue a research and teaching career in this field of study. It is my goal to make real changes in terms of conserving our planet and protecting our environment.
I am very interested in Marine Biology, and I believe my background will qualify me for such a Master’s program. Being admitted to such an elite University in terms of Marine Biology is not only a great honor but also a wonderful opportunity for students like me who are extremely interested in research but do not have many professional research foundation in their own country. I would like to continue my higher education and pursue a research and teaching career in this field of study. It is my goal to make real changes in terms of conserving our planet and protecting our environment.
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We are not so effusive in English; it does not sound so mature or professional. I am very interested in marine biology , and I believe my background will qualify me for your master’s program . My admission to your program would be a wonderful opportunity for study and research which is not possible in my own country.
- We are not so effusive in English; it does not sound so mature or professional.
- I am very interested in marine biology , and I believe my background will qualify me for your master’s program .
- My admission to your program would be a wonderful opportunity for study and research which is not possible in my own country.
- I hope to pursue a research and teaching career in this field.
- My long term goal is to make real advances in conserving our planet and protecting our environment.
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We are not so effusive in English; it does not sound so mature or professional.
I am very interested in marine biology, and I believe my background will qualify me for your master’s program. My admission to your program would be a wonderful opportunity for study and research which is not possible in my own country. I hope to pursue a research and
I am very interested in marine biology, and I believe my background will qualify me for your master’s program. My admission to your program would be a wonderful opportunity for study and research which is not possible in my own country. I hope to pursue a research and
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