Hello, I need some help in here :)

Hey Fellas, I'm new to this website, and I need some help, that's my motivation letter, I guess it has some mistakes since i'm not a native speaker, I'd love to see suggestions and corrections ..

Thank you all )

Ps: deadline is 30th Oct 2014
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Al ****** University
October 20th, 2014

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am applying for your Master program in ‘’International Studies and Diplomacy’’ starting from January 2015. My unlimited ambitions drove me here, for a probable new start of a career in diplomacy, the heart of the International Relations, convinced that this program suits my intellectual and cultural background, my academic interests and my professional dreams while I strongly believe in my personal profile and that I built and I tend to develop.

Why Diplomacy and International Relations?, it is known that diplomacy existed since the start of human life on earth, this huge field that involves negotiations on different levels, either between two persons, or between a number of great nations, this term that refers to the element why relations are still existing between people and nations, in other words, either diplomacy or chaos.

The interest in the offered master of International Studies and Diplomacy had a lot to do with the cultural and social background I had in the past few years, thanks to the Culture, Anthropology, Media, Leadership, Linguistics, Critical Thinking and Criticism studies I had at the undergraduate education, added to the prior interest in the field itself, Diplomacy has always been a main cornerstone of the development of societies, their relations and interests. I also believe that picking English Studies over any other possible field was always the right choice, and still my main reason to pick this field, and not any other one I would be interested in.

My real start was picking English Studies at Moulay Ismail University, the switch from a Scientific Baccalaureate was never a Stumbling block for me, the three years I had at university graced me with a wide range of subjects and features, and surely a new life style and behaviors. The academic, intellectual and analytical skills I have been developing while growing up since the first moments of starting up my new life away from family, within a set of new unprecedented courses and atmospheres, the busy schedule was only and definitely to realize my dreams of joining a high-profiled university like yours, which I consider the right place for my utopian dreams.

Away from the official fields of university, I had my own time at working online as a pundit, a translator and a free designer, the three positions afforded me enough time to deal in a direct way with foreigners from different cultural background, the three and a half years so far were so prolific of friendly and professional relations with several persons around the globe.

Aside from what was mentioned before, the diplomacy and leadership are still needed all over the world, with the recent events around the globe, the technical and analytical skills to develop at your university in diplomacy would definitely be the elements I am yearning for to realize my dreams, and probably the a part of difference needed to be made in the world.