Hello i need help yo review my Motivotional Letter

Here is my motivational letter, would like to hear advices:

Dear Sir/Madam,

Hope this letter gets as clear as posible. I would like to join the Master of Computer Science in the University of Twente. The main reason for the latter would be the fact i have studied a related career and im hungry for more knowledge about this field of study.

Computering has always been for me a serious interest and it reflects in the last study I have accomplished, Computer Engineering. Considering to keep the good way ,become a better profesional and get more skills, I would like to attend the classes in the Master’s study, then I could be able to obtain enough expertise in order to provide my experience to help the development of the IT Area.

I want to study in the University of Twente because I do think that I’m able to bring my interests and skills in software development and other computer areas such as Operative System’s Configuration and Databases to the study field and be a complement to the classes.

There is also another good reason why i do think that i would fit well in the Master's Study, considering that I’m eager to interact in the multicultural enviroment that the university provides, which i do think is positive, because I’m convinved that when minds from different nationalities and societies are able to work together they can be potentially very innovative.

With the humblest interest of being a contribution with all my skills and interests, and thanking you for considering my request.

Sincerely,

Rodrigo