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Paragon Posted 17 years ago
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Hello ^^" I have some question to ask you.

I'm paragon. I'm from Thailand. I'm trying to study English language. But now my teacher assign me to write a composition. I have finished one. It's about my mom. Let's read it!

"I believe you can do it!...", my mom always talk this speech to me.
Long time ago, I was so serious. Because there was a lot of exams. I had to test the Music Grade Exams, the highest rank of Dharma exams and had to examine at the school in the same month. So I consulted with my mom. She said she sured that I could do anything if I believe. My mom let me thought the past of mine. She told me that I had already passed problems many times. I felt better. Finally, I passed every examination. I got straight A's in school too. My mom was very proud of me. After that day I never afraid of taking an exam again. Then I won't give up when I confront the problems.

My mom always work hard and do anything to make me happy. I want my mom to be happy too. So I will take care her, look after her, be a good guy, and always say "Mom! I love you so much...".

That's all.

I try to do this very much. But I don't know is all correct?

Thank you very much for your suggestion.

Paragon
  

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Hi Paragon, you had already an excellent english but i just have some modifications for you and i hope you will like it .. keep it up! Long time ago, I was so serious.

  • Hi Paragon, you had already an excellent english but i just have some modifications for you and i hope you will like it ..
  • keep it up!
  • Long time ago, I was so serious.
  • Because there was a lot of exams.
  • I have taken the Music Grade Exams, the highest rank of Dharma exams and have to examine at the school in the same month.
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Hi Paragon, you had already an excellent english but i just have some modifications for you and i hope you will like it Emotion: smile..

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