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Anthony Twon Giordano Posted 13 years ago
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Hello, I am new here and would like this one sentence proofread
Black to white, from night to day, ignorance to knowledge – how swiftly my innocence and immaturity has left me.
Thank you in advance,
Anthony Giordano
Thank you in advance,
Anthony Giordano
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Anthony Twon Giordano Black to white, from night to day, ignorance to knowledge – how swiftly my innocence and immaturity has left me. Thank you in advance, Anthony Giordano I don't see anything wrong with it, except the hyphen should be an em dash (ALT/0151): Black to white, from night to day, ignorance to knowledge—how swiftly my innocence and immaturity has left me.
- Anthony Twon Giordano Black to white, from night to day, ignorance to knowledge – how swiftly my innocence and immaturity has left me.
- Thank you in advance, Anthony Giordano I don't see anything wrong with it, except the hyphen should be an em dash (ALT/0151): Black to white, from night to day, ignorance to knowledge—how swiftly my innocence and immaturity has left me.
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Anthony Twon GiordanoBlack to white, from night to day, ignorance to knowledge – how swiftly my innocence and immaturity has left me. Thank you in advance, Anthony GiordanoI don't see anything wrong with it, except the hyphen should be an em dash (ALT/0151): Black to white, from night to day, ignorance to knowledge—how swiftly my innocence and immaturity has
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Black to white, from night to day, ignorance to knowledge—how swiftly my innocence and immaturity has left me. My name is *** *** *** ***, however I acquired the second middle-name, ***, during my confirmation at the age of thirteen. I was born on February XX in the year 19XX—which would make me XXXteen—at the William Osler Health Center. I was also born and raised Catholic, but
Black to white, from night to day, ignorance to knowledge—how swiftly my innocence and immaturity has left me. My name is *** *** *** ***, however I acquired the second middle-name, ***, during my confirmation at the age of thirteen. I was born on February XX in the year 19XX—which would make me XXXteen—at the William Osler Health Center. I was also born and raised Catholic, but
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