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Contiluo Posted 11 years ago
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Hello, Holiday!
Please help me correct the paragraph. Thanks!
Hello, Holiday!
Alice and Linda are two girls who come from the USA and Japan. They are cyber acquaintance and had agreed on going on holiday to Taiwan. Unluckily, upon their arriving, it started raining, so they stayed at a hotel first. Linda worried that the rainy day would spoil their pleasure and all their travel plans might go up in smoke. Alice suggested they go to Kenting National Park, a holiday resort in southern Taiwan, where it is famous for its beautiful beach and sunshine. When they got there, the resort was thronged with holiday-makers. They played at the beach, swam in the ocean, and splashed about in the surf. As the sun sank in the late afternoon, a brisk wind from the ocean whipped up whitecaps. The sunset scene here is particularly fascinating. They had a good time on their holiday in Kenting and left behind wonderful memories.
Hello, Holiday!
Alice and Linda are two girls who come from the USA and Japan. They are cyber acquaintance and had agreed on going on holiday to Taiwan. Unluckily, upon their arriving, it started raining, so they stayed at a hotel first. Linda worried that the rainy day would spoil their pleasure and all their travel plans might go up in smoke. Alice suggested they go to Kenting National Park, a holiday resort in southern Taiwan, where it is famous for its beautiful beach and sunshine. When they got there, the resort was thronged with holiday-makers. They played at the beach, swam in the ocean, and splashed about in the surf. As the sun sank in the late afternoon, a brisk wind from the ocean whipped up whitecaps. The sunset scene here is particularly fascinating. They had a good time on their holiday in Kenting and left behind wonderful memories.
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contiluo Hello, Holiday! This is strange. The meaning is unclear so, you should explain it.
- contiluo Hello, Holiday!
- This is strange.
- The meaning is unclear so, you should explain it.
- contiluo They are cyber acquaintance They are cyber acquaintances contiluo and had agreed on going on holiday to Taiwan.
- and had agreed to go on holiday (or vacation in American English) to Taiwan.
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contiluoHello, Holiday!This is strange. The meaning is unclear so, you should explain it.
contiluoThey are cyber acquaintanceThey are cyber acquaintances
contiluoand had agreed on going on holiday to Taiwan.
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contiluoAlice and Linda are two girls (who come) from the USA and Japan, respectively. They are cyber acquaintances, and they had agreedon goingto go on holiday together to Taiwan.Unluckily, upon their arriving,Unfortunately, it started raining when they arrived, so they stayed at a h
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"Hello, Holiday!" is the topic of this paragraph. However, I change it as "A Happy Vacation."
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I have another question as follows. Should there be a comma before the word "which"? I prefer #1.
1. Alice suggested they go to Kenting National Park, a holiday resort in southern Taiwan, which is famous for
its beautiful beach and sunshine.
2. Alice suggested they go to Kenting National Park, a holiday resort in southern Taiwan which is famous for
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1. Alice suggested they go to Kenting National Park, a holiday resort in southern Taiwan, which is famous for
its beautiful beach and sunshine.
2. Alice suggested they go to Kenting National Park, a holiday resort in southern Taiwan which is famous for
it
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contiluoHowever, I change it as "A Happy Vacation."That, or, "A Happy Holiday." would be fine. You can choose either suggestion.
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