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Piplot Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Hello. Help me with my grammar please.
Well. My writing start this way : 
One of the best detitions I ever made was to learn maths by myself. For that, first, I learnt to ride a scooter to go through my town where I was living and find a lot of books in the bookshops.
It wasn't easy. Before that, I had to buy a scooter. Happily, my aunt gave me an old scooter. Then I began to practice with its, sincerely It was difficult.
In the end I learnt properly to ride a scooter and I get a lot of interesting books so that way I became in a good student and now I love maths yet. Also I have an interesting memory to remind for ever.
Thanks in advance.
One of the best detitions I ever made was to learn maths by myself. For that, first, I learnt to ride a scooter to go through my town where I was living and find a lot of books in the bookshops.
It wasn't easy. Before that, I had to buy a scooter. Happily, my aunt gave me an old scooter. Then I began to practice with its, sincerely It was difficult.
In the end I learnt properly to ride a scooter and I get a lot of interesting books so that way I became in a good student and now I love maths yet. Also I have an interesting memory to remind for ever.
Thanks in advance.
Top answer
I find the link between getting a scooter and learning math to be a very weak one. I think you'd be better to concentrate on one or the other. )
- I find the link between getting a scooter and learning math to be a very weak one.
- I think you'd be better to concentrate on one or the other.
- )
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I find the link between getting a scooter and learning math to be a very weak one. I think you'd be better to concentrate on one or the other. (The word is 'decision'.)
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Hi Mr. Could you see again my grammar? Because I think I wrote incorrectly the last paragraph.
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As I tried to explain earlier, I think your composition is too faulty right now to try to correct. I think you should not combine the two topics of learning math and buying a scooter in the same composition.
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This way?
One of the best decisions I ever made was to learn maths by myself. I wanted to win a lot of contests and to prove to myself that It wasn't impossible. So, I every day walk through the town where I was living to find a lot of interesting books in the bookshops or borrow books from the library. It wasn't easy because until that moment, sincerely I didn't know almost nothing, but
One of the best decisions I ever made was to learn maths by myself. I wanted to win a lot of contests and to prove to myself that It wasn't impossible. So, I every day walk through the town where I was living to find a lot of interesting books in the bookshops or borrow books from the library. It wasn't easy because until that moment, sincerely I didn't know almost nothing, but
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Much better!
...I walked every day. It wasn't easy, because until that moment, I really knew almost nothing. I didn't give up. Finally, I became a good student and now love maths. I also have good memories of the whole process.
...I walked every day. It wasn't easy, because until that moment, I really knew almost nothing. I didn't give up. Finally, I became a good student and now love maths. I also have good memories of the whole process.
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