0
Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Hello Guys can you check this before i gve it to the teacher

The article "Environmental politics" written by Felix is about the Green party and about their enterprise in the future.

Elizabeth May is the leader of the Green Party in Canada. Her party won their first seat in British Columbia. Gary Lunn, sportsminister and a member of the Green Party, won the seats of west coast Saanich and Gulf Island with more than 7000 votes.
Canada is the worlds leading exporter for the worlds nuclear indutsry and in most provinces like Quebec and British Columbia they produce hydroelectricity with the huge water resources.
Canadas international agrrement dolige to reduce the soaring greenhouse gas emissions to 6% elow 1990 levels by 2012.
But the government leader in 2007 Stephen Harper gave it up.
The lieberal and New Democratic parties bound themselves to introduce a trade carbon market.
The Liberals lost very much votes and the first time in their history they have not formed either the government or the official opposition.
The New Democratic party have to move up the case for carbon markets in the House of Commons.
The Green Party is now able to force their plans and projects.
They will fight against the climate change and try to produce more clean energy.
The victory in British Columbia shows that Canadians want green politics.
Harpers message was to steer Canada out of the global recession.
The Liberals and NDP wanted to won votes with the environmental politic.
  

Top answer

Do check the suggestion below for interpretations made. Note that your sentences are generally quite short and abrupt, unless you've picked them out from a larger article for checking ( "endeavour" is the British spelling; "endeavor" would be the American) - The article "Environmental politics" written by Felix is about the Green party and their enterprise for the future. Elizabeth May is the leader of the Green Party in Canada.

  • Do check the suggestion below for interpretations made.
  • Note that your sentences are generally quite short and abrupt, unless you've picked them out from a larger article for checking ( "endeavour" is the British spelling; "endeavor" would be the American) - The article "Environmental politics" written by Felix is about the Green party and their enterprise for the future.
  • Elizabeth May is the leader of the Green Party in Canada.
  • Her party won their first seat in British Columbia.
  • Gary Lunn, Sports Minister and member of the Green Party, won the seats of west coast Saanich and Gulf Island with more than 7000 votes.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
Do check the suggestion below for interpretations made. Note that your sentences are generally quite short and abrupt, unless you've picked them out from a larger article for checking ( "endeavour" is the British spelling; "endeavor" would be the American) -

The article "Environmental politics" written by Felix is about the Green party and their enterprise for the future.

Elizab

Related Questions