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Brentlopez001 Posted 6 years ago
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Hello, Good day everyone. I am amending my cv, could anyone please review my personal summary and rephrase those are not correct. Thank you

A precise and detail-oriented individual having 12 strong years in Procurement / Buyer career with specializationin Purchasing, Contracts Administration, Global & Strategic Sourcing, Inventory and Vendor Management inEquipment, Machine & Spare Parts, Computer Hardware & Software, Electrical, Electronics, Communications,CCTV, Security and Professional Audio / Video Equipment / Supplies. I exceed goals with an effective andproactive management style with strong communication skill and taking initiatives and decisions in a strategicmanner to accomplish growth and better opportunities. Demonstrated remarkable success in procurement, master commodity agreement and office administrationwith reputed corporate in the United Arab Emirates. An astute professional with extensive experience incommercial and government acquisition projects in conducting market research, issuing request forinformation/ quotation/ proposal, technical and commercial evaluation of bids, negotiating, recommending supplier selection, issuing purchase orders and master agreements and conducting vendor performanceevaluation besides developing strategic relationship with customers. My extensive relationship and experience with C Level Management will provide a great lead towards my skillsets and my extensive experience in a well reputed establishment in any industries. I believe I have harnessed myexperience and expertise to curve a winning edge for the organization.
  

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brentlopez001 A precise and detail-oriented individual having 12 strong years in Procurement / Buyer career with specializationin Purchasing, Contracts Administration, Global & Strategic Sourcing, Inventory and Vendor Management inEquipment, Machine & Spare Parts, Computer Hardware & Software, Electrical, Electronics, Communications,CCTV, Security and Professional Audio / Video Equipment / Supplies. That is not a sentence. It is gibberish and unprofessional.

  • brentlopez001 A precise and detail-oriented individual having 12 strong years in Procurement / Buyer career with specializationin Purchasing, Contracts Administration, Global & Strategic Sourcing, Inventory and Vendor Management inEquipment, Machine & Spare Parts, Computer Hardware & Software, Electrical, Electronics, Communications,CCTV, Security and Professional Audio / Video Equipment / Supplies.
  • That is not a sentence.
  • It is gibberish and unprofessional.
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brentlopez001A precise and detail-oriented individual having 12 strong years in Procurement / Buyer career with specializationin Purchasing, Contracts Administration, Global & Strategic Sourcing, Inventory and Vendor Management inEquipment, Machine & Spare Parts, Computer Hardware & Software, Electrical, Electronics, Communications,CCTV, Security and Professional Audio /

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