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Hello everyone, I want write about benefits and disadvantages smartphone. Please help me write in the SIMPLE PRESENT gramer.

Smartphones are the phones of today's era. There are many benefits to using a smartphone. For example, you can join an online group to get in touch with your family and friends who are staying far away from you. You can surf the internet and look up information about anything within a second. You can share a link, photo, pdf file, and useful documents with others. Another advantage of using a smartphone is paying bills from home easily without going to the bank. In fact, nowadays people use mobile phones even to earn a living. People can earn millions of tomans. There are lots of traders who trade stocks by using mobile phones. So not only there are a lot of advantages of using smartphones but also disadvantages but it depends on the way you use them.

Also, there are several disadvantages to using smartphones. Spending so much time makes people dependent and may get addicted to it which will lead to wasting their time. The effects of using smartphones and the distraction caused to drivers are very dangerous, as sending an instant message, or using the phone's other functions can all result in drivers not paying attention to the road and result in serious accidents. Also, data privacy and security, and identity are significant concerns. If a criminal steals a smartphone is the information stored on it accessible via apps can be viewed and possibly downloaded, so the information would no longer be confidential if your phone is stolen.

There are many pros and cons of mobile phones, but for the most part, I believe that without them, life wouldn't be the same.

Slide green 679 · Accepted Answer

Hello everyone. Please help me to write about benefits and disadvantages of smartphone. (SIMPLE PRESENT) Thank you.

Smartphones are the phones of today's era. There are many benefits to using a smartphone. For example, you can join an online group to keep in touch with your family and friends who are far away.You can surf the internet and look up information about anything within a second. You can share a links, photos, pdf file, and useful documents with others. Another advantage of using a smartphone is the easy payment of bills from home without going to the bank. In fact, nowadays people even use mobile phones to earn income. People can earn millions of tomans. There are lots of traders who trade stocks by using mobile phones. So not only there are a lot of advantages of using smartphones, but there are also disadvantages, but it depends on how you use them.

Also, there are several disadvantages to using smartphones. Spending so much time makes people dependent and they may become addicted to it, which wastes their time. The effects of using smartphones and the distraction caused to drivers are very dangerous for their, because sending an instant message, or using other functions of the phone can lead to drivers not paying attention to the road and serious accidents. Also, privacy and security of data, and identity are important concerns If a criminal steals a smartphone, the information stored on it can be viewed through apps and possibly downloaded, so if your phone is stolen, the information will no longer be confidential.

There are many pros and cons of mobile phones, but for the most part, I believe that without them, life wouldn't be the same.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Your essay is not organized correctly.

Smartphones are the phones of today. ~~'s era~~. There are many benefits to using a smartphone. (The instructions asked about the disadvantages also. Your topic sentence must be complete. Do not put specific details in the opening paragraph. It is only an introduction. See the outline of an essay below.) For example, you can join an online group to keep in touch with your family and friends who are far away.You can surf the internet and look up information about anything within a second. You can share a links, photos, pdf files, and useful documents with others. Another advantage of using a smartphone is the easy payment of bills from home without going to the bank. In fact, nowadays people even use mobile phones to earn income. People can earn millions of tomans. There are lots of traders who trade stocks by using mobile phones. So not only there are a lot of advantages of using smartphones, ~~but there are also disadvantages, but it depends on how you use them~~.

(You just wrote about the many many advantages. It is not logical to now say there are disadvantages. You need to organize the arguments in a logical manner.

1. Opening paragraph - Write a general introduction and your thesis statement, for example:

The smartphone is a modern invention based on computer technology. It has become wildly popular in every country of the world, largely replacing the traditional dial phones which required an installation and connection by a fixed line. Smartphones also are very versatile with many functions. That gives it many advantages. However it can be used incorrectly, which means that there are some disadvantages to watch out for.

In this introduction, you write a general background in 2 or 3 sentences. Then tell the reader what the rest of the essay is about. This is a thesis statement, which can also be one or two sentences.

2. Body paragraph #1. Describe the advantages.

3. Body paragraph #2 Describe the disadvantages.

4. Conclusion. - Summarize the main points. Repeat your thesis.

Also, there are several disadvantages to using smartphones. Spending so much time on them makes people dependent and they may become addicted to it, which wastes their time. The effects of using smartphones and the distraction caused to drivers are very dangerous for them, ~~their,~~ because sending an instant message, or using other functions of the phone can lead to drivers not paying attention to the road and getting into serious accidents. Also, privacy and security of data, and identity are important concerns If a criminal steals a smartphone, the information stored on it can be viewed through apps and possibly downloaded, so if your phone is stolen, the information will no longer be confidential.

There are many pros and cons of mobile phones, but for the most part, I believe that without them, life wouldn't not be the same.

Slide green 679 · Answer

Thank you very much. I make the changes and resubmit. *** bless you.

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