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At present there are only three stakeholders as a management team, As soon as the business operation starts in a full phase, we will look forward to hire the full time employees. We will also using the contract basis employees depending up the level of work increases.

This area will be reviewed at the end of the first year in business, and decisions on further employees/contractors made on the basis of actual financial results.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

At present our management team consists of three stakeholders. As soon as the company is fully operational, we will be hiring full-time employees, and we will also be using contract workers as business increases. This will be reviewed at the end of the first fiscal year, and decisions on additional employees/contractors will be made on the basis of financial results.

Chameleon Upadhyaya · Answer

Thank you Mister, It seems great ! Can you do a a little favor more ? Please help me correcting below texts.

Strategy:
Realtelinfotek is starting its wholesale carrier business and VOIP business. We need to develop the marketing strategy first. The strategy will be action taken in future. Typical strategies include low cost provider, product leadership, customer intimacy and niche marketing. Most Realtelinfotek offering wholesale and retail carrier services have adopted a low cost provider strategy with the rationale that they are competing against the incumbent.
Following is the key points of Realtelinfotek marketing strategies:

Determine the target audience
Analyze the competition
Outline the campaign
Build in measures
Set a schedule

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Services
Realtelinfotek will offer the wholesale and carrier service business to the telecom operators, VOIP providers and retailers located all over the world. When the Realtelnfotek offers carrier services, the customer should be confident that the quality of service is equal to regular service providers. Ideally the customer will not have to consider whether the service is same as their current service providers or question its technical capabilities.

Mister Micawber · Answer

Strategy

Realtelinfotek is a wholesale carrier and VOIP business. We need to develop our marketing strategy for the future. Typical strategies include low cost provider, product leadership, customer intimacy and niche marketing. Most Realtelinfotek wholesale and retail carrier services have adopted a low cost provider strategy with the rationale that they are competing against established firms.

Following are the key points for developing Realtelinfotek marketing strategies:

Determine the target audience
Analyze the competition
Outline the campaign
Build in measures
Set a schedule

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Services

Realtelinfotek will offer wholesale and carrier service business to telecom operators, VOIP providers and retailers all over the world. The customer should be confident that the quality of Realtelnfotek service better than other service providers. Ideally the customer will not have to consider whether our service is the same as their current provider or question its technical capabilities.

Chameleon Upadhyaya · Answer

Thank you Mister for your help,

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