Hello everyone,how do i get help in writing attractive letter?

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I have a letter and would very much appreciate if some one could check whether my letter is good or not

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

You can post it here and if it is not too long, someone will check it for you.

Tony lourdes · Answer

Dear Mister Micawber, How can i improve my English written skill set?. Is there any special way?

Nutron · Answer

Thanks Micawber, I would very much appreciate your help. I am not very good at writing.Seeking help that is the reason why. If you could check I would be grateful

Dear Sir/Madam,
I bought *** for a meeting booked 3 weeks later from the date purchased from *** company in Asia.They promised to deliver with in 2 weeks max, which was fine by me.After 2 weeks I did not receive any updates or my product, I was getting worried as I was running out of time. I mailed them with my inquiry - no response.Called them at the end, could not understand a single word they were saying. I was getting furious, after speaking to many of their staffs one of them managed to explain me that my product was not dispatched yet. That was very unprofessional of them. I wished they had a office in London with English speaking staffs where I could contact and communicate regarding any matter. Then I heard about this company which is based in the *** country as the other one but got a office in London. I straight away placed an ordered through them and explained what happened with the other. They assured me it would not happen with them. They were very committed and delivered it with in 5 days. It shows good communication always makes ones life easier.
Directors message - " No one person can claim to have all the right answers all the time. I believe that team work is what makes these companies such a great value.
As a director it is my pleasure to provide direction and maintain the consistently high standards of communication and apparel quality excellence that our clients not only demand, but also deserve".
Are your days hectic and frustrating?
Are you finding trouble to communicate with manufacturers?
We have well qualified team who speaks english and could communicate with any clients regarding any matter. We have opened in London to ensure you piece of mind for any queries or to solve problems. You may contact our London office instead of chasing our factories in Bangladesh. We would like to make your work easier with convenience. It is our family business. We have been in this manufacturing business for the last 16 years. We have 4 different type of factories
1)Knitwear
2)Shirts
3)Bottoms
4)T-shirts
We are attaching our factory profiles,pictures of our products which has reached well known brands such as ZARA,BERKSHA,PULL & BEAR,MATALAN,JACJ & JONES,PRIMARK, GEORGE, WALLMART to name a few. We are confident that we are capable of delivering a quality service and product to you. We would like you to give us samples or could chose from our look book. We would get back to you with our quote as soon as we could. I look forward to your reply and to do business with you.
Kind Regards,
xxxxx
xxxx
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