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Simpleibr Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

Hello everyone! pls. revise my letter again..Thanks in advance

Dear Sir,


Good day for you!


Thank you for your prompt response to this matter, I already mentioned this to the RCC HEAD and I will inform her again regarding the result of your 2nd investigation with the students who were failed to give relevant information about their allegation with the Teacher. I will let you know as soon as I receive a feedback from her.

  

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I've noticed that in some of your posts you start with 'Good day'. This is not commonly done by native speakers. Clive

— Clive

  • I've noticed that in some of your posts you start with 'Good day'.
  • This is not commonly done by native speakers.
  • Clive
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I've noticed that in some of your posts you start with 'Good day'. This is not commonly done by native speakers.

Clive

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Dear Sir,

Thank you for your prompt response to this matter. I have already mentioned this to the RCC head. I will inform her again regarding the result of your 2nd investigation with the students who failed to give relevant information about their allegation concerning the teacher. I will let you know as soon as I receive some feedback from her.Yours sincerely,
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