Hello everyone, i have wrriten an Informal letter, i really need you to check it. thanks :)

Saturday, December 12th, 2009

Dear *****,

How are you? I am sorry I have not written till now.
I want to tell you about a trip I had to Eilat with my family in the summer vacation. It was an amazing trip. First, we were in a hotel for three days with my family, later on we went to "Underwater Observatory Marine Park", there were many kinds of fish and animals that I have never seen before, for example: sea cat and also sharks. I had a really good time there.
We also were in the promenade of the "Red Sea", and "Timna Park"; it was a beautiful place, full of activities and big beautiful rocks.
I also dived with my family, and we had a lot of fun.
On the one hand, we really had a great time in Eilat, we have enjoyed every moment, on the other hand, the weather was awful, it was very hot out there.
By the way,
I want to tell you that although we were far away from home, I have met many friends there therefore I wasn't bored at all.
In conclusion, it was an amazing experience, and I sure that if you were coming with us , It could be even better.
Sorry I must finish my letter, but I promise I will write you again as soon as I can.
So, that's all for the meantime.

Yours,
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