Hello! Could you tell if that paragraph is right?

From my point of view, the most dangerous invention is computers. We cannot deny that technology has facilitates our life process so far but it has also caused a lot of trouble. So we need to sort out that problem at our early convenience. To begin with, a majority of people regard weapons or bio engineering as serious type of invention, but I tend to state that computers are getting us in a greater trouble because we are severely dependent on this very fragile system to deliver our daily bread, electricity, water, organize our national security and government and perform routine functions like balancing the global checkbook.