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Nara Gurbanova Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

hello!! could you please proofread my motivation letter?? looking forward to hearing from you.

Motivation letter
Dear Sir/Madame,
By means of this letter I am applying for entrance to Master degree of Teaching English Program in Hungary in September 2016. Being keen and passionate as well having unique talent in this area, it is eminent for me to succeed in accomplishing my desire which is to attach myself to a Top University that will support me with knowledge and techniques in the main aspects of teaching. Stating it as an ideal faculty, the point under my determination is the solid and charming essence of this discipline. I am strongly attracted by how teaching opens the realms of knowledge not only to the students, but also throughout this process it widens your mental outlook. As I started taking the opportunity of knowing foreign language from the third year of university with teaching, got to succeed at it, and now I can feel that the knowledge which I am gaining through this experience makes me able to manage a class of students of different age groups.
I am a graduate of Azerbaijan University of Languages in Baku, an institution of excellent reputation in terms of its pedagogic and linguistic programs. During my study at the University of Languages, I learned using arts and media effectively, expressing ideas creatively, translating concepts, feelings and visions, maintaining equilibrium between creativity, fantasy, technology, efficiency and human interaction as well. I am assured that the knowledge I accomplished at this school has given me adequate preparation to meet all requirements of studying in Hungary.
More than that, after my graduation in 2014, I was vigorously implicated in my professional career. I had already started my professional carrier as a teacher at a company (“Invent” MMC) in 2013. In the next workplace (“Vision” Education and Training center) I was holding conversation classes based on a personal teaching program. At another company („English Time“ International Language School) I have even been presented a month of practice in Istanbul, Turkey, at the main Turkey brunch. Currently, I am teaching at an Educational Training center- GRBS. Despite these, I do believe that, with studying in Hungary, I would get a chance to communicate in an academic environment and this advanced education would strengthen the quality of my methodology.
My career objective after completing my master program is to return to Azerbaijan, to look for a teaching position at the English Department of a major Azerbaijan university where I can apply what I have learned from this program. I will consciously guide my English teaching with the specific teaching principles to make my practice more effective and fruitful. Meanwhile, I will do extensive research work on the topic that English teaching is not only an art but also a science. My terminal career objective is to develop myself into an expert in Azerbaijan in the field of English teaching.
Obtaining Master degree at your University is harshly daring and also zealous. I believe that this programme is an inevitable chance to meet numerous people, spend useful time with them and find out their customs, attitudes, lifestyle, etc. Additionally, living, studying and socializing with international scholars would enlarge my outlook and enable me to set up powerful transmitted network with people throughout Europe. I hope that my educational background and experience will fit the requirements of your scholarship enrollment and I do hope that I will get a chance to become a student of your University.

Wholeheartedly,
Nara Gurbanova
  

Top answer

I have marked some areas that are unnatural collocations or awkward language. By means of this letter I am applying for entrance to Master degree of Teaching English Program in Hungary in September 2016. Being keen and passionate as well having unique talent in this area , (dangling modifier.

  • I have marked some areas that are unnatural collocations or awkward language.
  • By means of this letter I am applying for entrance to Master degree of Teaching English Program in Hungary in September 2016.
  • Being keen and passionate as well having unique talent in this area , (dangling modifier.
  • ) to a T op U niversity (not a proper noun) that will support me with knowledge and techniques in the main aspects of teaching.
  • ) and charming essence of this discipline.
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I have marked some areas that are unnatural collocations or awkward language.

By means of this letter I am applying for entrance to Master degree of Teaching English Program in Hungary in September 2016. Being keen and passionate as well having unique talent in this area, (dangling modifier. ) it is eminent for me to succeed in accomplishing my desire which is to attach
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Dear AlpheccaStars !!! thanks very much for your answer, it was so helpful Emotion: rose
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don't know how competent my letter is, but with this i am applying for the master of English teaching faculty in Hungary.. would like to know your attitudes. tomorrow i am sending it
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Motivation letter

By means of this letter I am applying for entrance to Master degree of Teaching English Program in Hungary in September 2016. Being keen and passionate towards to this area, it is eminent for me to succeed in accomplishing my desire which is to apply to a top university that will support me with knowledge and techniques in the main aspects of teaching. Consi
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Well, you did not correct all the errors that I highlighted earlier.
Anyway, good luck with your application.

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