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What do you think what is successful and happy life?  When they think of succeeding they think of material benefits and they think of accomplishment. Some one think that successful life is mean people, who can graduate on with highest honor.somebody think that people, who have the best of everything Certainly, being successful can include all of these things. But I think that successful and happy life doesn't mean people, who have the best of everything, they just make the best of everything. They just do what they want to do.( in good way). they don't care about what other people says about them. So I want to write about thai young man, who is successful person. 
His name is top. He was in Thailand on 27 november 1989 in Chiang Rai, where is located in the north of Thailand. He isn't interested in learning. He addicted playing games a lot. When he learned in high-school, he always got the worst marks in the class. Every one insult him. Every one said that he is useless people. He played game on-line, which call Everquest. He very good in game. He could sell items in game for other people, especially foreigner. Game on-line like place, where make a lot of money for him. He very hard to graduate from high school because of game. He entered university only one year. After that he left university in order to make a business.  At that time every one said that he stupid to leave university. But his father, who believed in him, said that one day you will become a great businessmen.  He don't care about other's opinion. He decided to make a business about seaweed. He makes seaweed chips. 
Only one year he can extend Franchises to 30  branches in Thailand.
Now he is the youngest successful man in Thailand.