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Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?

It is thought by some people that growing up in the city is more advantageous for children than in the countryside. Others, however, argue that country life is better. While both situtations have their benefits, there are also some drawbacks.

One evident benefit to growing up in the city is the availability of institutions that offer the best education. In other words, the best schools that children can enroll in are situated in urban areas. World-class school facilities, for example in Brazil, are located in its capital. Another reason why city living would help children is that hospitals are readily available. This would enable children, particularly those with disability, to be able to function well in society. Parents will also not worry much once their young ones get sick as clinics are just few minutes away from home.

On the other hand, living in the city can be disadvantageous for children. This is because crime rates are higher in densely populated areas. Detroit, for example, registered a very high youth homicide rate in 2010. No parents would want to live in a place where their children are not safe. City living could also expose children to illicit drugs, which can result in addiction and later on, the devastation of their future.

Living in the countryside, meanwhile, could potentialy be beneficial to children. I remember growing up in the province, the air is fresh and pollution is not a major concern. Thus, respiratory diseases are literally non-existent. Another thing to consider why country living would be great for young people is that food items are certainly fresh. It is a well-known fact that eating organic fruits and vegetables can improve the children’s overall health.

However, there are obvious disadvantages to living in the countryside. Most rural areas have a mediocre education system. For instance, as the facility in my province is lacking, I needed to stay in the city just to attend primary school when I was younger. Apart from this, hospitals are not as abundant in rural areas compared to urban areas. My friend’s daughter has a rare medical condition and they have to travel by plane regularly just to have access to better health care. This is a financial burden that they need to face living in the province.

In conclusion, while growing up in either the city or countryside has plus points, there are also some drawbacks. Parents should be able to weigh the pros and cons of either of them to ensure a great future for their children.