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Tural Musayev Posted 9 years ago
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Can you update me on my salary payment, as it was promised I would be paid this week? As yet there has been no transfer into my account and no communication from anyone to update me on the status. Please respond with an update.
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Please be informed that we sent the documents to the main office for transfer into your account on the 19th January but it was not paid as you know. We have encountered this type of situation first time, therefore, a lot of problems occurred. I promise you that your salary will be paid on Monday and this kind of delay will never happen again.
Can you update me on my salary payment, as it was promised I would be paid this week? As yet there has been no transfer into my account and no communication from anyone to update me on the status. Please respond with an update.
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Please be informed that we sent the documents to the main office for transfer into your account on the 19th January but it was not paid as you know. We have encountered this type of situation first time, therefore, a lot of problems occurred. I promise you that your salary will be paid on Monday and this kind of delay will never happen again.
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The key to revision is looking for more simple, direct and concise ways of saying the same thing and thereby expediting communication. ) Question I was promised I would be paid this week, but there has been no transfer into my account and no communication from anyone. Can you update me on my salary payment?
- The key to revision is looking for more simple, direct and concise ways of saying the same thing and thereby expediting communication.
- ) Question I was promised I would be paid this week, but there has been no transfer into my account and no communication from anyone.
- Can you update me on my salary payment?
- Response We apologize for this failure.
- We sent the transfer documents to the main office January 19th, but problems occurred because this is the first time we have done this.
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The key to revision is looking for more simple, direct and concise ways of saying the same thing and thereby expediting communication. (Here, in particular, the phrase 'please be informed that' is an irritatingly useless phrase that should never be taught.)
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I was promised I would be paid this week, but there has been no transfer into my account and no communic
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I was promised I would be paid this week, but there has been no transfer into my account and no communic
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