hello! can you see my letter of motivattion how is it?

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in applying for a Master's Degree Programme in *******starting summer 20017. I believe my educational background would enable me to make a strong contribution at the University. I graduated in year 20015 in the Faculty of Natural Science, Tirane, Albania and got a bachelor degree in informatics. I have decided to apply for this programme because I am sure it would strongly enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career as well as it is dynamically developing more technology and promises to fulfil the professional goals that I have set for myself.
The reason why I did a year off was to improve my knowledge in this field and the level of English.
I have always been thinking about my future, building a career becoming a successful person and generally finding my own path in the life. Almost all my family have their job which somehow connected to the field of science and it had great influence on the development of my personality.
I raised in a poor family which all me four sisters and me had to work during studies to cover our studies. I also worked eight months voluntary in my community teaching the children the basic of computer. In this way I learnt how to deal with difficulties in our life and to estimate the job and education.

The first acquaintance with your university began from collecting particular information about it . On the website of Xy University I found information about master’s programme in comp science and I am truly interested in it. I think the master’s programme of your university will be great and useful experience for me because the programme contains the subjects in which I was always interested in. I am impressed with the high education level and demanding programs, as well as great job opportunities and professional approach to modern technologies. Conducting Post Graduation studies and research within the Science group would improve and increase my knowledge and practical experience,especially because I have very little research possibilities in my country. It will be my privilege to work, develop Post Graduation thesis and learn from professors with grate experience in theory and practice I am much eager to adopt and know new technologies. I am really enthusiastic to attend a master of computer science in order to understand different computer science concept, because every industries needs the concept of computer science. Good reputation of high quality of education standards, an extremely distinguished faculty members and research facilities are the factors which have motivated me to choose for my Msc studies the xy

The undergraduate curriculum in informatics at faculty of natural science introduces me to wide variety of informatics subject.
Various courses like electronic, algoritmiths , multimedia, IT,,,,, provided me with a strong footing in the theoretical concept of computer science. The level of specialisation here is quite poor and teaching methods are all oriented on theoretical knowledge which I believe is nearly useless when it comes to real-life work. Dutch universities provide European education and are focused on practical side of things. They are also known world-wide for their international education. And this is great, because this allows to study in an international environment, to meet people from around the world, who came to study just like you and to exchange experience and ideas with these people, to learn and understand inside differences, weaknesses and keys of IT companies world-wide, to get knowledge, skills and education which is actually competitive in conditions of globalization.
I believe that enrolment to MSc computer science program at in university of xy is a right step in reaching my goal of becoming a good IT specialist. University of xy is widely-known for its high level of technical education and leading positions among German universities and this is why I have chosen this university and hope to be accepted to it. Since then, I have tried to find out more about the Germany and the more I have been learning, the more motivation to study there has grown. The educational approach that is used in Germany would provide me with the widest range of specialisation in the field of computer as well as a lot of practical skills which is exactly what I need. When I found the XY programme at xy university I realised that it is the best choice for me
Studying at your university will significantly improve my English skills. As one the most important languages in the world, English will help me to form new connections and expand my social network to a global level.
This programme will help me to develop myself as a team player and cultivate the leadership skills necessary for my future career. I will learn To be responsible not only for myself, but also for the whole team .
I am much eager to adopt and know new technologies. I am really enthusiastic to attend a master of computer science in order to understand different computer science concept, because every industries needs the concept of computer science. Good reputation of high quality of education standards, an extremely distinguished faculty members and research facilities are the factors which have motivated me to choose for my Msc studies the xy
I believe that our country has much more potential, therefore as a true patriot, I wish to contribute to the development .To implement such goal I need to improve my leadership qualities and acquire special knowledge in chosen field of education, which will be possible if a join xy university
I understand that studying abroad is going to be the most challenging step in my life so far, but I also believe I can withstand any problem I face and make the most of the knowledge and experience gained through this study program. I hope to contribute my talents and efforts to your university and become worthy member of team,
Thank you in advance for your consideration and time.