This is my first post on this forum and I feel glad to consider me as a member of your community. So, could you please correct my writing?
In this afternoon, I had an enjoyable time with one of my colleague at the university. We discussed many issues together. She told me about her travel to Qatar during this coming period. As for me, I told her about my applying for a new job as a telesales person. Surprised as she was, she asked me to take her to where I applied. Only few moments and she was there to fill the application.
Later on, we both went to a restaurant to have a meal. During eating, I was all ears of what she was saying about her decisions she had taken for this summer vacation and how she will spend her spare time there. Although she doesn’t like traveling for a longtime, she was more interested to go than any past time. And the most surprising thing was she said she will bestow me a gift when she comes back to Cairo. It was the reason behind waking till dawn , thinking of how lucky I have this friend.
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Hi Ruba, Welcome to the Forum. Here are a few edits. Read carefully!
— Clive
Hi Ruba, Welcome to the Forum.
Here are a few edits.
Read carefully!
In this afternoon, I had an enjoyable time with one of my colleague s at the university.
We discussed many issues together.
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