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For thousands of years the Amur River has been feeding people. He became a real breadwinner for millions. A large program operates to preserve the viability status of Amur salmon. Our enterprise takes part in the work of the program in order to preserve and increase the national fish treasure of Russia.
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The second sentence is not really appropriate for this kind of text; in any case, a river is 'it', not 'he'. For thousands of years the Amur River has been feeding people. A major program is working to maintain the viability of Amur salmon, and our enterprise takes part in order to preserve and increase this natural treasure of Russia.
- The second sentence is not really appropriate for this kind of text; in any case, a river is 'it', not 'he'.
- For thousands of years the Amur River has been feeding people.
- A major program is working to maintain the viability of Amur salmon, and our enterprise takes part in order to preserve and increase this natural treasure of Russia.
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The second sentence is not really appropriate for this kind of text; in any case, a river is 'it', not 'he'.
For thousands of years the Amur River has been feeding people. A major program is working to maintain the viability of Amur salmon, and our enterprise takes part in order to preserve and increase this natural treasure of Russia.
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