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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Hello, can someone check my sentences?

I think this makes an excellent poem for thanksgiving, and we do have a lot to be thankful for in the US. I sometime think we take so much for granted. God is good to us, but we need to remember where all the blessing come from.
  

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Hi, I think this makes an excellent poem for thanksgiving, and we do have a lot to be thankful for in the US. I sometime think we take so much for granted. *** is good to us, but we need to remember where all the blessing come from.

— Clive

  • Hi, I think this makes an excellent poem for thanksgiving, and we do have a lot to be thankful for in the US.
  • I sometime think we take so much for granted.
  • *** is good to us, but we need to remember where all the blessing come from.
  • I think this makes an excellent poem for Thanksgiving, and we do have a lot to be thankful for in the US.
  • I sometimes think we take so much for granted.
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Hi,
I think this makes an excellent poem for thanksgiving, and we do have a lot to be thankful for in the US. I sometime think we take so much for granted. *** is good to us, but we need to remember where all the blessing come from.

I think this makes an excellent poem for Thanksgiving, and we do have a lot to be thankful for in the US. I sometimes think we take so much for granted
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Anonymous*** is good to us, but we need to remember where all the blessing come from.
I think with but you have inadvertently suggested something you did not intend. As it reads, it suggests to me that the blessings come not from *** but from elsewhere. I would have used and we need to remember that all our blessings come from
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Thank you for the help. Happy Thanksgiving to you also.
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Hi,
They are fine. 'Too' is better than 'also', and put a comma in front of it.

Clive
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