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Ashkan Razania Posted 10 years ago
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Hello all,Can you please correct my paragraph

Chemical analysis, surface hardness, core hardness, harden depth and fractography is completed. The part met the requirement of 1E2003. Figure 1 shows general condition of part as received to met lab for failure analysis. Some wear are exhibited on the surface of part .High magnification of the surface (Fig 3) indicates that the part failed by wear-Rolling contact fatigue mechanism. Friction is an important factor in this type of wear and the friction force are influenced primarily by the material, Surface configuration and lubrication. It is recommended that engineers ensure right material, heat treatment and lubrication system is used for this part
  

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Some of this was unclear, so I had to guess what you wanted to say. If you still need assistance on this paragraph, I would word it like this: Chemical analysis, fractography, and the testing of surface, core and depth hardness have been completed. The part met the requirement of 1E2003.

  • Some of this was unclear, so I had to guess what you wanted to say.
  • If you still need assistance on this paragraph, I would word it like this: Chemical analysis, fractography, and the testing of surface, core and depth hardness have been completed.
  • The part met the requirement of 1E2003.
  • Figure 1 shows the general condition of the part as received by the lab before a failure analysis was performed.
  • Some wear was exhibited on the surface.
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Some of this was unclear, so I had to guess what you wanted to say. If you still need assistance on this paragraph, I would word it like this:

Chemical analysis, fractography, and the testing of surface, core and depth hardness have been completed. The part met the requirement of 1E2003. Figure 1 shows the general condition of the part as received by the lab before a failure anal

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