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Pilita Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Hello again!!!
I am struggling with my essay(due tomorrow). I have a hard time figuring out fragments and complete sentences.So can someone check my sentences?
1# Can you imagine the sun blazing blistering your skin, freezing temperatures making you breathing difficult, or being exposed to harmful pesticides?.
2#It is a key points for “The Plum Plum Pickers”, written by Raymond Barrio, and “The Organizer’s Tale”, written by Cesar Chavez.
3#Farm workers are provided with poor drinking water, food, and toilets are not always available for them.
4#Their desperate need for survival and to feed their family force farm workers to work under those conditions.
Thank you for your help,
Pilita
1# Can you imagine the sun blazing blistering your skin, freezing temperatures making you breathing difficult, or being exposed to harmful pesticides?.
2#It is a key points for “The Plum Plum Pickers”, written by Raymond Barrio, and “The Organizer’s Tale”, written by Cesar Chavez.
3#Farm workers are provided with poor drinking water, food, and toilets are not always available for them.
4#Their desperate need for survival and to feed their family force farm workers to work under those conditions.
Thank you for your help,
Pilita
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Hello again Pilita I would say, with one or two small changes: 1# Can you imagine the sun blazing and blistering your skin, or freezing temperatures making your breathing difficult, or being exposed to harmful pesticides? – sentence. 2# It is a key point in “The Plum Plum Pickers”, written by Raymond Barrio, and “The Organizer’s Tale”, written by Cesar Chavez.
- Hello again Pilita I would say, with one or two small changes: 1# Can you imagine the sun blazing and blistering your skin, or freezing temperatures making your breathing difficult, or being exposed to harmful pesticides?
- – sentence.
- 2# It is a key point in “The Plum Plum Pickers”, written by Raymond Barrio, and “The Organizer’s Tale”, written by Cesar Chavez.
- – sentence.
- 3# Farm workers are provided with poor drinking water and food, and toilets are not always available for them.
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Hello again Pilita
I would say, with one or two small changes:
1# Can you imagine the sun blazing and blistering your skin, or freezing temperatures making your breathing difficult, or being exposed to harmful pesticides?
– sentence.
2# It is a key point in “The Plum Plum Pickers”, written by Raymond Barrio, and “The Organizer’s Tale”, written by Cesar Chavez.
I would say, with one or two small changes:
1# Can you imagine the sun blazing and blistering your skin, or freezing temperatures making your breathing difficult, or being exposed to harmful pesticides?
– sentence.
2# It is a key point in “The Plum Plum Pickers”, written by Raymond Barrio, and “The Organizer’s Tale”, written by Cesar Chavez.
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