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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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* Society has always been affected by various aspects such as: climate changes, individuals education and especially the criminals rate. While a crime is said to be the result of social issues and poverty, there are other opinions that bad person's nature cause an offense. In my opinion, social issues and poverty are the main causes of crimes because not only the interactions between people make people be negatively affected by social issues but also the poverty make those individuals not have enough education and cares so that individuals tend to commit a crime.
* First of all, social problems badly impact on people's behaviours through various various means: media, educational environment. Indeed, the basic human need is the interaction with other individuals, which could make them to interact with bad behaviours. For instance, more and more movies and TV shows have a tendency to add violent acts. Citizens especially teenagers who are interested in watching them are likely to commit a crime than others. Another example, the rate of school violence are growing all over the world. As a result, children who are educated in those educational environment has a tendency to do the same things with citizens whenever he wants. In conclusion,
*Another point worth noting is the lacking of cares and education caused by poverty. Indeed, without enough understanding about legal and basic necessity, citizens are likely to be distressful and commit a crime. For instance, in Brazil favela, children are born among crimes and poverty. As the result, those children grow up and learn to earn money by illegal way: selling drugs, robbery because they don't have other choices. Another example, in Africa countries especially in countryside or villages that are far away from cities, government could not ensure enough schools and also citizens don't have enough money to take their kids to the schools. Without being educated, those children grow up and could not determine if an act is legal or not. As a result they are likely to commit sexual crimes or violent crimes.

  

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