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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Hello,
Could you tell me whethe the following sentence is fine?
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The idea of Machiavelli, which princes should make their countries militarily stronger and prosper in economy even with immoral means, was quite revolutional in his time and totally against the virtue of Catholic.
Thank you for your reading.
The idea of Machiavelli, which princes should make their countries militarily stronger and prosper in economy even with immoral means, was quite revolutional in his time and totally against the virtue of Catholic.
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Hi, No, there are many mistakes. Do you want to try again? It might be simpler for you to use two sentences instead of one.
- Hi, No, there are many mistakes.
- Do you want to try again?
- It might be simpler for you to use two sentences instead of one.
- Clive
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Hi,
No, there are many mistakes. Do you want to try again?
It might be simpler for you to use two sentences instead of one.
Clive
No, there are many mistakes. Do you want to try again?
It might be simpler for you to use two sentences instead of one.
Clive
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I appreciate your comments. Here is the one revised.
The idea of Machiavelli was quite revolutional in his time and totally against the virtues of Catholic churches. He insisted that princes should make their countries militarily stronger and economically prosperous even with immoral means.
The idea of Machiavelli was quite revolutional in his time and totally against the virtues of Catholic churches. He insisted that princes should make their countries militarily stronger and economically prosperous even with immoral means.
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Hi,
Much better
The idea of Machiavelli was quite revolutional in his time and totally against the virtues of Catholic churches. He insisted that princes should make their countries militarily stronger and economically prosperous even with immoral means.
I suggest this.
The ideas of Machiavel
Much better
The idea of Machiavelli was quite revolutional in his time and totally against the virtues of Catholic churches. He insisted that princes should make their countries militarily stronger and economically prosperous even with immoral means.
I suggest this.
The ideas of Machiavel
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Thank you, Clive. By the way, what I want to say is a liitle different from your suggestion. (Maybe I needed to revise it more.) I think you might also see it by the following one. Could you check whether the following sentences are fine?
The ideas of Machiavelli were quite revolutionary in his time, and tota
The ideas of Machiavelli were quite revolutionary in his time, and tota
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Hi,
what I want to say is a liitle different from your suggestion. (Maybe I needed to revise it more.) I think you might also see it by the following one. Could you check whether the following sentences are fine?
The ideas of Machiavelli were quite revolutionary in his time, and totally counter to the teachings of the Catholic Church. He insisted t
what I want to say is a liitle different from your suggestion. (Maybe I needed to revise it more.) I think you might also see it by the following one. Could you check whether the following sentences are fine?
The ideas of Machiavelli were quite revolutionary in his time, and totally counter to the teachings of the Catholic Church. He insisted t
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